基本的句型写作方法

基本的句型写作方法

１、不要连续使用几个简单句，要学会使用复杂句

a) Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.

b)Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, thought they feel a little guilty sometimes. （非谓语形式作为开端，增加了句子结构的复杂性）

下面的是顶级的复杂句：

a) College students now are primarily interested in grades and economic success. They are

expected to cheat on exams more frequently. This is not like those who graduated 10 years ago. They are only concerned with their own personal future. They ……此处隐藏377个字……women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms. They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.

b) I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to equal opportunities for promotion.

a) The nationwide controversy over the current reforms will test the courage of our people. Though the controversy we can also see the determination of our government.

b) The nationwide controversy over the current reforms will test the courage of our people and the determination of our government.